July 25, 2007

 

Fifty word fiction: Dat's A Keeper

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Benny and Hilda sit by the pool at the Super 8. It’s not open – it’s November. “Evah seen one’a dem Amish?” asks Benny. “You know da ones wit da buggies dat don’t like dere pictcha taken?”

“Yes, Ben darling, I most certainly have.”

“I got a book fulla dere souls.”
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Comments:
Nice. I like the lyric tag...Stella is one of those tunes that gets me, every time.
 
This one rocks!

Well done.

Ook ook
 
Nice ;)
 
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