July 25, 2007


Fifty word fiction: Dat's A Keeper

Benny and Hilda sit by the pool at the Super 8. It’s not open – it’s November. “Evah seen one’a dem Amish?” asks Benny. “You know da ones wit da buggies dat don’t like dere pictcha taken?”

“Yes, Ben darling, I most certainly have.”

“I got a book fulla dere souls.”

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Nice. I like the lyric tag...Stella is one of those tunes that gets me, every time.
This one rocks!

Well done.

Ook ook
Nice ;)
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